I have read through the sheets that the class filled in from the presentation of our title sequence. The biggest downfall of our title sequence was quite obviously due to the fact that it was incomplete and we were yet to add the titles. We knew that this was going to impact greatly on the feedback we received, but it was expected as it was unfinished. We are going to proceed in the editing of our title sequence, making further improvements as we go along. Another factor of our title sequence that was criticised on was the occasional shaking on some of the camera shots. We obviously found it fairly difficult for the camera not to shake given that we were only using a flip cam. However, for our title sequence to be as good as it can we may re-film the shaky shots.
Another thing we need to improve on in our title sequence is the repetitiveness of the shots we used. The audience felt that we didn't use enough variation in our choice of shots. I think we will rearrange our title sequence to make it not appear as it being too repetitive, or we will just re-shoot more specific shots to give the title sequence more of a variation.
On the other hand, we did also recieve some positive feedback from the class. It came to a mutual agreement that the overall lighting of the title sequence was good. It fit in with the genre of film, and set the ambience. Another thing that the class think worked with our title sequence was the music we used. The soft piano music tied in well with the genre and also the lighting.
